~Ines' writing class~

Thursday, May 03, 2007

Summary 1-The Graduation Present

A young man was very expected for his father gave him a sports car as a graduation gift. However, he thought his father only gave him a bible and then he run away from home and hadn’t connected with his father for several years. Many years later, he went back to home when he learned his father had just pasted away and he received some possessions. Finally, he saw the sports car’s key just in the bible and realized that his father had already bought for him.

Tuesday, April 17, 2007

Paraphrasing and Summarizing- The 2008 Olympic

Beijing is chosen to hold the 2008 Olympic Games , however there are a lot of works must to do before the Games. Firstly, a large stadium will have to be built and facilities will also have to be privided for many events. Secondly, build a competition arena and an accommodation. Thirdly, new roads and airport will have to be built for the greater numver of travellers. Nevertheless, the hard work will be worth it. Many countries will take part in the Olympics and the sportsmanship will be the most important characteristic.

Monday, April 09, 2007

A significant sofa with lint- Final

There is a sofa in my living room. It sounds nothing special, but you will find that it is more clapped-out than the other sofas. It is a soft chair and has a cushion with lint. Why we put such an old chair there? It has a story.
When my parents got married, they didn't want to ask my grandparents to give them anything. All of the furniture were bought by my parents themselves, including the house. However, my grandparents still wanted to buy something to my mom as wedding presents. Finally, they bought a set of sofas. My mom even cried for this surprise. Since my parents moved into their house, the set of sofa has been there. Time went by slowly and the wooden sofa had been eaten by termites. We had no choice but threw them away, and we left the fine piece which currently is put in our living room.
Until now, I usually sit on that sofa and have a drink. My father always sits on it and cuts his foot nails. My mother always sits on it and watches Korean episodes and my brother always sits on it and plays video games. Although that sofa seems not to match with the other new sofas, it is my parents' memory and also a significant chair for me.

Tuesday, March 20, 2007

Interpretatino of Data

Introduction
Chart 2 (a bar chart or histogram) shows the payments made by business&organization and expenditure lobbyisits to influence local legislative and administrative action. The vertical axis shows the amount made of people who work in different Business and organization and the horizontal axis compares the fiften working place listed.
Comment
As can be seen form the chart, by far the largest amount of payment is in AT&T compared with any other business and organization. In fact, AT&T accounted for as much as $66957 in the payment. On the other hand, Hotel Council , SF Chomber of commerce, Chevron Texaco, and Bank of America together accounted for no more than $1000 for the total.

Thursday, March 15, 2007

A significant sofa with lint

There is a sofa in my living room. It sounds nothing special, but you will find that it is more clapped-out than the other sofas. It is a soft chair and has a cushion with lint. Why we put such an old chair there? It has a story.
When my parents got married, they didn’t want to ask my grandparents to give them anything. All of the furniture were bought by my parents themselves, including the house. However, my grandparents still wanted to buy something to my mom as wedding presents. Finally, they bought a set of sofas. My mom even cried for this surprise. Since my parents moved into their house, the set of sofas are there. Time went by slowly and the wooden sofa, had been eaten by termites. We had no choice but to throw them, but leave the fine one which currently puts in our living room.
Until now, I usually sit on that sofa and have a drink. My father always sits on it and cuts his foot nails. My mother always sits on it and watches Korean episodes and my brother always sits on it and plays his video games. Although that sofa seems not to match with the other new sofas, it is my parents’ memory and also a significant chair for me.

Tuesday, March 13, 2007

Combined Qualifications

1. Attractive people seems to have more favorable personal attributes than unattractive people.
2. Economic sanctions may be ineffective.
3. Alcohol appears to have caused people to become violent.
4. It is possible that passive smoking causes cancer.
5. There is a slight possibility that recycling is the best solution to the waste disposal problem.
6. Physical exercise may reduce depression.
7. It seems that deep tunnels are safer and less bulnerable to earthquake shaking thatn are shallow tunnels.
8. Private schllos might provide a better eduction than do public schools.

Monday, March 05, 2007

Stage2-Qualification

Last year all overseas students completed University Registration forms. Most overseas students accomplished University library membership application. The majority of overseas students finished National Health Service registration. Many overseas students fulfilled International Student Identity Card application. A number of overseas students filled in Accommodation Office application.
A few overseas students applied for Magazine subscription.

Wednesday, February 28, 2007

My Winter Vacation

I had a disastrous winter vacation this year than before. The reason is that I began to wear braces. This feeling is very wonder just likes you always eat some iron in your mouth. And my dietary habit has changed, too. I can not eat any hard food because it would heart my tooth. For example: sweet corn, guava, and chicken feet. Especially, I can not bite food with my front tooth. My tooth also usually gets heart, in that way, I can not eat my favorite food any time. I also did one thing that I never did before. After Chinese New Year’s Eve, I started to eat weight-losing meal. It must be very brave. When everybody was eating plenty of meat and fish, I just can eat my little peace of cookies and fruits.
I went to Taiching twice this winter vacation. Although I almost went to the same place but that was not the point. I had a date with Ryan, Mandy and Karen. We still were classmates in that moment, but after the winter vacation finishing, there will have some differences. We can not get together very often. We had a big meal together and talked a lot about our first semester life.
Besides those two things, my winter vacation just like before. All the same, stay at home, be a good child, got red envelopes and nothing else.

Wednesday, January 10, 2007

Comparison and contrast-Draft 2 (Window shopping and Internet shopping)

Most people love shopping and they can choose which way they prefer, the window shopping or Internet shopping. However, there are three differences between them, the convenience, the security and the practicability.
In the first pont is the convenience. The window shopping is not as convenience as Internet shopping. You must go outside for the window shopping but if you choose Internet shopping, you just sit in front of the computer and click the mouse. If you choose the window shooping, you may suffer from the ache of legs because the long distance and the long time. At the same time, you may suffer from the crowded streets.
In the second point is the security. The security of Internet shopping is lower than window shopping. Internet is an open area. Anybody would know your private information through Internet but you wouldn’t know. As long as you your shopping on the Internet, you may involve in the trap of the mobs.
In the third point is the practicability. The practicability of the window shopping is higher than Internet shopping. You can check the merchandise immediately and you will know what you really like. If there has any problem, you can ask the vendor immediately. On the other hand, Internet shopping means that you can only see the merchandises on the Internet. There are a lot of people regretting that they have bought the wrong things because there are some differences between the pictures on the Internet and the reality.
No matter which shopping way you choose, just buy what you need and don’t reveal your private informaiton to the strangers. Then, you may have an agreeable shopping time.

Tuesday, January 02, 2007

Comparison and contrast-Draft 1 (window shopping and Internet shopping)

Most people love shopping and they can choose the way which they prefer, window shopping and Internet shopping. However, there are some differences between them, the convenience, the security and the practicability.
In the first place, the convenience. Window shopping is not convenience as Internet shopping. Window shopping must go outside but Internet shopping just sit in front of the computer and click your mourse. If you choose window shooping, you may suffer the ache of legs cause the long distance and the long time. At the same time, you may suffer the crowded streets.
In the second place, the security. The security of Internet shopping is lower than window shopping. Internet is an open area. Anybody would know your private informations though Internet but the person involved wouldn’t know. As long as you your shopping on the Internet, you may involve in the trap of the mobs.
In the third place, the practicability. The practicability is higher than Internet shopping. You can check the merchandise face to face and you will know what is the merchandise really like. If there have any problem, you can ask the vendor immediately. On the other hand, Internet shopping means that you only can see the merchandises on the Internet. There are a lot of people repentant that thay have buy the wrong things because there are some differences beteen the pictures on the Internet and the reality.
Nomatter what shopping way you choose, just buy what you need and be careful don’t reveal your private informaiton to the strangers. Then, you may have an amusive shopping time.

Sunday, December 24, 2006

Comparison and Contrast-outline(Window shopping and Internet shopping)

MAIN IDEA
Compare and contrast window shopping and Internet shopping: the convenience, the security and the practicability.

BODY
1.The convenience:
Window shopping is not convenience as Internet shopping. Window shopping must go outside but Internet shopping just sit and click your mouse.

2. The security:
The security of Internet shopping is lower than window shopping.
Anyone may reveal their private informaitons to other people.

3.The practicability:
The practicability of window shopping is higher than Internet shopping. You can see the goods face to face.

Conclusion
Nomatter what shopping way you choose, just buy what you need.
Don’t be a extravagant person.

Sunday, December 10, 2006

Classification-Final (Friends)

Everybody has his or her own friends and I am not an exception. There are three different groups of my friends. The first category consists of enthusiastic friends who are very concerned about my studies. The next group includes those who usually take me to taste delicious food. The third category is made up of sincere friends who listen to me and accompany me when I am in a bad mood. The first category of friends I have had are enthusiastic friends who are very concerned about my studies. For example,Kate and Eunice usually tell me what I should do today and remind me of time to study or write homework. Felicia , my college friend, always asked me of what my grades were after the exams. Especially when I had problems with the subjects, she always helped me patiently. Even when I was down due to my bad test grades, she always gave me a comfort. I had some friends who usually took me to taste delicious food. Adelina is one example of this group. When I went to cram school with Adelina, we usually had dinner together. She usually drove me to some delicious or special restaurant and also told me which vendor sell delicious food. In that way, I know where the delicious food is in kaohsiung. Sonia is a typical example of those sincere friends who listen to me and accompany me when I am in a bad mood. I have known her for seven years and she was also my classmate in college. We have gone through many things including good or bad things. No matter how impossible the situation was, she always accompanied me. She almost knew everything about me. Every time one of us was in a bad mood or had a glad thing, we used to stay side by side and share the mood with each other. Now, although I am studing in Nantai, I still keep in touch with such a friend. Ryan is another typical example for me. I usually share my feelings with her. She not merely encourages me but also gives me a comfort. There are many kinds of friends and I am so glad that I have an honor to have those friends who stay around me. Either they are the old friends or the freinds who I have now light up my students’ life.

Thursday, November 30, 2006

Classification-Draft 1 (Friends)

Everybody has his or her own friends and I am not exceptional. There are three different groups of my friends. The first category consists of enthusiastic friends who is very concerned about my homework. The next group includes friends who usually take me to taste delicious food. The last category is made up of sincere friends who listen to me and accompany me when I am in a bad mood or have some glad things.
The first category of friends I have are enthusiastic friends who is very concerned about my homework. Kate and Eunice , who usually tell me what is the work I should do today and remind me it is time to study or to write the homework because I usually forgot the time. Felicia , my collage friend, always ask me how was my scores after the exams. When I had problems about the subjects, she always tought me patiently. Even when I was down for my test scores, she always gave me a comfort.
I had some friends who usually took me to taste delicious food. Adelina is one example of this group. When I went to cram school with Adelina, we usually had dinner together. She usually drove me to some delicious or special restaurant and also told me which vendor sell delicious food. It relly liked what she said to me. In that way, I know where the delicious food is in kaohsiung.
Sonia is typical of those sincere friends who listen to me and accompany me when I am in a bad mood or have some glad things. I have known her for seven years and she was also my classmate in collage. We have gone through many things include good or bad. No matter how the situation is, she always accompany me. She almost knows about the things about me. Too many times when one of us had a bad mood or had a glad thing, we used to stay by the other one's side or share the mood with the opposite side. Now, even if I study in Nantai, I also have such a friend. Ryan is also typical of these kind of friends for me. I usually share my feelings with her. She is not merely refuels for me but also gives me a comfort.
There are too many kinds of friends and I am so glad that I ahve the honor to have those groups ' friends around me and stay with me. No matter the old friends or the freinds who I have now. They light my student's life.

Tuesday, November 21, 2006

Classification-outline (Friends)

Introduction:
There are three different groups of my friends.

Body:
1. enthusiastic friends who is very concern about my homework.
2. friends who usually take me to taste delicious food.
3. sincere friends who listen to me and accompany me when I am in a bad mood or have some glad things.

Conclusion:
I am so glad that I have the honor of to have those friends around me and stay with me.
We really had a colorful time.

Monday, November 20, 2006

The meaning of quote

1. "A student is not a vessel to be filled but a lamp to be lighted."
We should not use the cram way on the students but inspire them.

2. "Nine-tenths of education is encouragement."
Most educations are beneficent.

3. "To educate a man in mind and not in morals is to educate a menace to society."
It is better to deucate a man in morals tham in mind or he can not distinguish right or wrong.

4. "I pay the schoolmaster, but it is the other boys who educate my son."
Not every schoolmaster is good at teaching, maybe he knows less than or act likes your son.

Thursday, November 02, 2006

Descrition-Final

My special roommate
Ryan is my roommate and classmate this semester. She is from Nantou and she had studied informatics for five years in Ling Tung University of Technology before she came to Nantai. There are 3 people in her family. Now she lives in the school dormitory.
Ryan likes to do exercises. For instance, basketball, jugging, and badminton. Sometimes after dinner, she goes to jug with other classmate. Sometimes we also like to play badminton after class and we really have fun. She is really interested in programming in the computer. In that way, she plans to become a computer programmer.
Ryan is very funny and talkative, and she always makes me laugh. On the contrast, she is also a girl who is shy and nervous very often. When she feels shy or nervous, her face will become red quickly. She is also a sweet girl. For instance, when I feel tired she would help me to carry my bag and remind me what I should do now. Her appearance let me think that she is an adult, but when she plays with the other people, she is very crazy just like a child. I can tell Ryan concerns about me because she always tells me what I should do or what I should not do. She is really a special person.
I am very glad to know Ryan when I study here and become her close roommate and classmate. I can image that with such a good friend, my school life will not be boring.

Monday, October 30, 2006

Descrition-Draft 2

My special roommate
Ryan is my roomate and classmate this semester. She is from Nantou and she had studied informatics for five years in Ling Tung University of Technology before she came to Nantai. There are 3 people in her family. Now she lives here in the school dormitory.
Ryan likes to do exercises. For instance: basketball, jugging and badminton. Sometimes after dinner, she goes to jug with the other classmate. Sometimes we also like to play badminton after class and we really have fun. She is really interested in programing in the computer. In that way, she plans to become a programmer in computer.
Ryan is very funny, talkative and she always makes me laugh. On the contrast, she is also a girl who is easy to feel shy and vervous. When she feels shy or nervous, her face will become red quickly. She is also a sweet girl. For instance, when I feel tired she would help me to carry my bag and reminds me what I should do now. Her appearance let me thought that she is an adult person but when she plays with the other people, she is very crazy and just likes a child. I can tell that Ryan concerns about me because she always tell me what I should do or what I should not do. She is really a special person.
I am very gald to know Ryan when I study here and become her roommate and classmate. I can immage that I have such a good friend, my school life will not be boring.

Monday, October 23, 2006

Description-Draft 1

Ryan is my roommate and classmate this semester. She is from Nantou and she has been five years in Ling Tung University of Tecnology to study informatics. There are 3 people in her family. Now she lives here in the dormitory.
Ryan likes to do excices, for instance: basketball, jug and badmiton. Sometimes after dinner, she goes to jug with the other classmate. We also like to play badmiton after class and we really have fun. She is really interested in the program in computer , in that way, she plans to become a programmer in computer.
Ryan is very funny and talktive and always make me laught. On the contrast, she is also a person who is easy to feel shy and nervous. When she feels shy or nervous , her face will become red quickly. She is also a sweet person, for instance, when I feel tired she would help me to carry my bag and reminds me what I should do now. Her appearance let me though that she is an adult but when she plays with the other people, she is very crazy and just likes a child. I can tell that Ryan concens about me because she always tell me what I should do or what I should not do. She is really a special person.
I am very gald to know Ryan when I study here and become her roommate and classmate. I can immage that I have such a good friend, my school life will not be boring.

Saturday, October 21, 2006

Sentence combining

1. Chihuahua, the largest Mexican state, is divided into tow regions which are a mountainous area in the west and a desert basin in the north and east.

2. Disney World, an amusement park located in Orlando, Florida, covers a large area of land including lakes, golf courses, campsites, hotels, and a sildlife preserve.

3. Jamaica, the third largest island in the Caribbean Sea, is one of the world's leading producers of bauxite which is an ore that Aluminum is made from.

4. Robert Ballard, an aceanographer, made headings in 1985 that he discovered the remains of the Titanic, the "unsinkable" passenger ship which has rested on the floor of the Atlantic Ocean since 1912and struck an iceburg in 1912.

5. William Shakespear's father was a glove maker and a town official named John Shakespear who owned a shop in Stratford-upon-Avon, a town is about 75 miles northwest of London.

6. The Republic of Yemen is an ancient land located at the southwestern tip of the Arabian Peninsula which has been host to many properous civilizations including the Kingdom of Sheba and various Islamic empires.

Description-outline

MAIN IDEA
Who? Ryan where? Nantai When? this semester

BODY
1. Basic background information
Comes from Nantou.
Was major in informatics in Ling Tung
There are 3 people in her family.

2. Personal information
likes to play basketball
sometimes likes to jug after dinner
likes to play badmiton
plans to become a programmer in computer

3.My reactions to Ryan
Very funny and talkative
Sometimes very shy and nervous
Sometimes do something to make me feel sweet
Sometimes seems like an adult but sometimes acts like a child
concerns about me , tell me what I should do or what I should not do

Conclusion
I am very glad to have such a roommate and calssmate.

Tuesday, October 10, 2006

How to make a chicken soup

First, select a tender chicken and after cleaning it. Then cut it into quarters and place it into a soup kettle with 3 quarts of water, 2 tablespoons of rice, or pearl barley, and salt to taste. Next let it boil slowly and Remove the scum (dissolved chicken fat) that rises to the surface. When the chicken is thoroughly done, remove it and place it on a dish, garnish with double parsley and eat with drawn butter. Finally serve the broth in a deep-covered china bowl or tureen and send to table hot.

Monday, October 02, 2006

How glass bottles are made

First glass is made from sand, limestone, and sada ash. Then, these three materials are mixed together in the right proportions. Sometimes broken glass is added. Then, this mixture is heated strongly in a furnace. After this, glass is produced. Then, it is shaped into bottles in the mould. Next, the bottles are reheated and cooled to strengthen the glass. Finally, they are ready to be used.

Sunday, September 24, 2006

My First Day in the Class

I still remember my first day in the class. I was very nervous and looking forward to my classmates and teacher because it was my first class in Nantai. During the last night, I had checked for those things what I should bring for many times and made sure that everying was got ready, including me.
Fortunately, we had a good teacher and the classmates also looked kind. But maybe I am not do well in computer program , I was quite nervous about the blog setting. I felt the temple was a little bit slowly because we were spent too much time on the blog setting.
The writing class was fine but the next classes was a dash to me .
I was very tired in the first day but I will try to get used to it.

Tuesday, September 19, 2006

Something about me

My name is Ines. I was born in 1985, Dec.14. I am not native here and I live in Kaohsiung county.
I had studied in Kaohsiung for five years, in that way, Kaohsiun is my faverite city in Taiwan.
My family has 4 people and 2 dogs, my parents and an older brother. We live very peaceful and scarcely argue.
Table tennis is my faverite sport. If anybody also likes to play table tennis. Let's play it.I would be very glad to it.
Nantai is strange for me and now I am trying to get use to this enviroment.I hope I can get alone with you guys very well and I'd like to be your friend.I am sincerly. Let us get progress in English writing so if I have anything wrong or anything could be better with my writing, tell me please.Thanks a lot
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