~Ines' writing class~

Wednesday, January 10, 2007

Comparison and contrast-Draft 2 (Window shopping and Internet shopping)

Most people love shopping and they can choose which way they prefer, the window shopping or Internet shopping. However, there are three differences between them, the convenience, the security and the practicability.
In the first pont is the convenience. The window shopping is not as convenience as Internet shopping. You must go outside for the window shopping but if you choose Internet shopping, you just sit in front of the computer and click the mouse. If you choose the window shooping, you may suffer from the ache of legs because the long distance and the long time. At the same time, you may suffer from the crowded streets.
In the second point is the security. The security of Internet shopping is lower than window shopping. Internet is an open area. Anybody would know your private information through Internet but you wouldn’t know. As long as you your shopping on the Internet, you may involve in the trap of the mobs.
In the third point is the practicability. The practicability of the window shopping is higher than Internet shopping. You can check the merchandise immediately and you will know what you really like. If there has any problem, you can ask the vendor immediately. On the other hand, Internet shopping means that you can only see the merchandises on the Internet. There are a lot of people regretting that they have bought the wrong things because there are some differences between the pictures on the Internet and the reality.
No matter which shopping way you choose, just buy what you need and don’t reveal your private informaiton to the strangers. Then, you may have an agreeable shopping time.

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