Comparison and contrast-Draft 2 (Window shopping and Internet shopping)

Most people love shopping and they can choose which way they prefer, the window shopping or Internet shopping. However, there are three differences between them, the convenience, the security and the practicability.
In the first pont is the convenience. The window shopping is not as convenience as Internet shopping. You must go outside for the window shopping but if you choose Internet shopping, you just sit in front of the computer and click the mouse. If you choose the window shooping, you may suffer from the ache of legs because the long distance and the long time. At the same time, you may suffer from the crowded streets.
In the second point is the security. The security of Internet shopping is lower than window shopping. Internet is an open area. Anybody would know your private information through Internet but you wouldn’t know. As long as you your shopping on the Internet, you may involve in the trap of the mobs.
In the third point is the practicability. The practicability of the window shopping is higher than Internet shopping. You can check the merchandise immediately and you will know what you really like. If there has any problem, you can ask the vendor immediately. On the other hand, Internet shopping means that you can only see the merchandises on the Internet. There are a lot of people regretting that they have bought the wrong things because there are some differences between the pictures on the Internet and the reality.
No matter which shopping way you choose, just buy what you need and don’t reveal your private informaiton to the strangers. Then, you may have an agreeable shopping time.

Comparison and contrast-Draft 1 (window shopping and Internet shopping)

Most people love shopping and they can choose the way which they prefer, window shopping and Internet shopping. However, there are some differences between them, the convenience, the security and the practicability.
In the first place, the convenience. Window shopping is not convenience as Internet shopping. Window shopping must go outside but Internet shopping just sit in front of the computer and click your mourse. If you choose window shooping, you may suffer the ache of legs cause the long distance and the long time. At the same time, you may suffer the crowded streets.
In the second place, the security. The security of Internet shopping is lower than window shopping. Internet is an open area. Anybody would know your private informations though Internet but the person involved wouldn’t know. As long as you your shopping on the Internet, you may involve in the trap of the mobs.
In the third place, the practicability. The practicability is higher than Internet shopping. You can check the merchandise face to face and you will know what is the merchandise really like. If there have any problem, you can ask the vendor immediately. On the other hand, Internet shopping means that you only can see the merchandises on the Internet. There are a lot of people repentant that thay have buy the wrong things because there are some differences beteen the pictures on the Internet and the reality.
Nomatter what shopping way you choose, just buy what you need and be careful don’t reveal your private informaiton to the strangers. Then, you may have an amusive shopping time.